Tuesday, March 24, 2009

Beverly hills chicago

They walk around like they run the whole school. they are trashy, filthy, have no sense of style, but yet think that they are unique in their ways, fights, violence, and revenge is what they believe in.but yet they are still so highly commended.

2 comments:

chinyere said...

srry its late but i dnt have internet at hom so i had 2 wait till 2day.....

mbrown8625 said...

Thanks for turning it in! I do appreciate it!

Your feelings about this topic are very strong. Very very strong. Love your ability to express them. Try, however, to let the words express the emotion, rather than letting the emotion overrun the words. What poetic devices could you use to convey disdain? Think about it